Post by clayjs on Apr 23, 2012 10:36:35 GMT -5
Ladies and Gentlemen,
A second draft of my Tax Day script, revised into something a little more screenplay-ish. Thought I'd revise and re-post over here now that the competition is over. Please give me notes!
Oz--I've addressed your note about, you know, making it filmable (at least I believe I have). It will still require the same boats of special effects and very careful design, but everything on the page now informs the visuals directly, I think. Let me know how successful I was with that, and I'd appreciate any other notes you have at this point, too.
Mark--I think I addressed your notes in my post back in the competition forum. Let me know if I missed your point or if you've got any other notes. Thanks!
Thanks all,
Clay
A second draft of my Tax Day script, revised into something a little more screenplay-ish. Thought I'd revise and re-post over here now that the competition is over. Please give me notes!
Oz--I've addressed your note about, you know, making it filmable (at least I believe I have). It will still require the same boats of special effects and very careful design, but everything on the page now informs the visuals directly, I think. Let me know how successful I was with that, and I'd appreciate any other notes you have at this point, too.
Mark--I think I addressed your notes in my post back in the competition forum. Let me know if I missed your point or if you've got any other notes. Thanks!
Thanks all,
Clay
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